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Ye kahani ekdum hi hatt ke hone waali hai. Aisi kahani aapne nahi padhi hogi. Kahani sub genre - 'System' par adhaarit hai. Jinhone chinese aur japanese novels padhi hai iss sub genre ki unhe pata hoga. Par jinhone nahi padhi hai unke liye ye ekdum new hone waali hai. Isliye, mene socha kyu na iss sub genre ko yaha forum par introduce kiya jae.
Ab kuch key points dhyaan me zaroor rakhiyega kahani ko padhne se pehle kyuki baad me comment section me apun ko koi bakchodi nahi chahiye.
1. Story ka prefix wese toh mein fantasy rakhne wala tha par kyuki isme incest bhi hai kaafi maatra me toh mene incest rakh diya.
2. Story harem par based hai.
3. Story based toh real world me hi hai par kuch logics apply nahi honge.
4. Ye kahani kaalpanik hai. Isme charchit sabhi paatr keval meri kalpanao ka hissa hai. Yadi koi naam, vyavsaay, ya kuch aur asal zindagi me kisi se mel khaata hai toh ye keval ek sanyog hoga. Isse kisi galat nazariye sa na liye jae.
Bas ye 4 points ko dhyaan me rakhiyega.
Intro chota sa hi dunga, mein chaahta hu readers khud hi kahani padh ke characters ke baare me jaane taaki aap paatro se aur acche se familiar ho sake. Isliye, zyada bada intro nahi dunga.
Ye kahani ekdum hi hatt ke hone waali hai. Aisi kahani aapne nahi padhi hogi. Kahani sub genre - 'System' par adhaarit hai. Jinhone chinese aur japanese novels padhi hai iss sub genre ki unhe pata hoga. Par jinhone nahi padhi hai unke liye ye ekdum new hone waali hai. Isliye, mene socha kyu na iss sub genre ko yaha forum par introduce kiya jae.
Ab kuch key points dhyaan me zaroor rakhiyega kahani ko padhne se pehle kyuki baad me comment section me apun ko koi bakchodi nahi chahiye.
1. Story ka prefix wese toh mein fantasy rakhne wala tha par kyuki isme incest bhi hai kaafi maatra me toh mene incest rakh diya.
2. Story harem par based hai.
3. Story based toh real world me hi hai par kuch logics apply nahi honge.
4. Ye kahani kaalpanik hai. Isme charchit sabhi paatr keval meri kalpanao ka hissa hai. Yadi koi naam, vyavsaay, ya kuch aur asal zindagi me kisi se mel khaata hai toh ye keval ek sanyog hoga. Isse kisi galat nazariye sa na liye jae.
Bas ye 4 points ko dhyaan me rakhiyega.
Intro chota sa hi dunga, mein chaahta hu readers khud hi kahani padh ke characters ke baare me jaane taaki aap paatro se aur acche se familiar ho sake. Isliye, zyada bada intro nahi dunga.
